First Critiques

First Photo: The lack of color does NOT bring out the picture of the rocks or the water, and the horizon does not seem clear. The rainbow is the only thing that stands out and could still even use a little more color, and the way the beach and water take up half the photo instead of 2/3 or 1/3 is boring and could be a little more defined. I do like the view from the rocks and the way the rainbow cuts through the length ways of the photo and the darkness of the clouds really defines the rainy day that makes the rainbow. Deffinitly cooler then a normal sunny picture at this scene.

Edited Photo

Second Photo:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/mingsum2/201437332/